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Honorable Mention
The Tin Man Crushes His Own Heart
Puck1967

I wandered once down a path
Where sod had grown above a road
Dusty houses crushed from falling
Story long forgotten, but often told
In terms so green, this emerald scene
The yellow footfall thus could never
Halt the dream from which it came
Where men of straw are very clever
Where water’s poison against flesh green
Melts a face not understood
But for the poppies in the wood
And there were poppies in the wood.

Then I came into the field,
Flowers, colors gold and red,
Orange. Imagine, every hue
Of purple, golden, green and blue
So many that I turned and fled
Into the wood and hid in dark
Corners there under the shade
Near a rusted, withered axe I sat
And sobbed until my fear was shun
Looked to the field the glint of tears:
How could I pick just one?
How could I pick just one?

Left I looked into the grass
Where the axe had upon a hand
Only gloves with metal hewn
The axe then rose, it struck me thus
Across my back too fast too soon.
Flowers left, in blue and red
Only blossoms full of thorns
A silver man, red eyes and horns
A mark or two, a minor scar
I worshipped him in black and steel
I never dreamt I’d go this far
I never dreamt I’d go this far

We’d talk a while, but begat
A dream ensconced of reds and greens
And talking makes the mind forget
Through the tears where I winced
I realized was one of many,
That flowers too grow in the dark
That men of steel are men with heart
And even though that skin is hard
Deflects an arrow, a piercing dart
The bricks that blossoms hid asunder
Still are ready to fall apart
And bricks indeed do fall apart.

The annealed king of axe and flower
Stood astride the field and road
Tears flowing down onto his arms
Into the bed of flowers and dirt
He picked more cuttings than he should
For stems don’t cut but with tender care
And thorns in flowers cause bitter eyes
That tear and flow from everywhere
Thereupon his rust did halt
His thrashing crushing bleeding axe
And somehow it was all my fault.
And somehow it was all my fault.

Take the brick into your hand.
Uproot its mortar. The dirt descends.
Turn it, yellow has flown the gold
Sought, but paint, flaking, old
Falling. Thus the straps you hide
In the drawer, wet and sticky
Used many times on many others,
Sometimes wanton, but often picky.
What pain forsaken, what fondness wrought
What costume should he wear?
Could he bear the heart he sought?
I doubt he knew the heart he sought.

The eye then wandered from his sight
Onto the crushed and broken brick.
Astonished, he then takes his life
From his chest, and rips apart
The gifted ticking clicking heart.
Then walks away, across the gap
Where the brick, once was bright
His back to me, into the dream.
Alone, his steps aloof, alight
A tattered tapping tiny sound
Hanging off his old tin boot.
A strap to which a hand was bound
An answer which cannot be found.

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